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More Than a Weekend Read–The Distant Hours

Happy first Friday of 2013, friends. Special thanks to Carrie Rubin for all the love that came this way after she linked blogs with me earlier this week, and to all those who’ve come by since! So nice to have company!

Warning: this post runs a bit longer than normal but I hope you stick it out. Couldn’t figure out the best way to break it down.

Moving on:

I’m a reader. Surprise, right? Maybe not as dedicated or ardent as some, but I love a good story.  And I’ve read many books.

I recently posted my take on author Carrie Rubin’s debut, The Seneca Scourge. Before that, I’m pretty sure the last books I talked about were Karen Kingsbury’s One Tuesday Morning and its sequel, Beyond Tuesday Morning. The former changed me, in a way. Resonates with me still.

I wrote this, however, on the heels of having finished Aussie author Kate Morton’s The Distant Hours, the first and only of hers I’ve read so far. (Disclaimer: I share these thoughts because I choose to, not because I was paid to do so in any way. As with so many others, this book found me. My friend thought I’d enjoy it.) 

My friend was oh-so-right.

Honestly, I’ve never felt so humbled by the scope and magnitude of a wordsmith’s work, doubt I’ll ever equal this one’s ability to develop and then tell a story of such quality. Maybe I haven’t read enough, but I’ve never before experienced a tale so intricately and profoundly layered. Every thread, every detail accounted for before expertly woven and seamlessly sewn together; a multitude of puzzle pieces gathered into a final story portrait of near perfection.

The Distant Hours

I say ‘near’ for these reasons:

The story starts slowly. We meet Edie Burchill, whose mother, Meredith, receives a letter that should have been delivered fifty years earlier. Her enigmatic ways and decision not to share details of the letter pique Edie’s curiosity. Driven by a force she can’t explain, Edie finds herself literally stepping into her mother’s past, meeting face-to-face the spinster sisters who took in thirteen year-old Meredith as an evacuee from London during WWII.  Edie also winds up learning a whole lot more about the book that inspired her as a child, its author, his family and the story events that led to the creation of a renowned and revered best seller. (FYI, Ms. Morton starts you off at a leisurely pace, but she picks up momentum steadily and takes you full-throttle into a climax laden with twists that surprised me with their brilliance and not a loose thread left hanging.)

The protagonist’s viewpoint (and main story mood) waxed a bit boggy, at times slowing the pace when I liked the way the story was gaining speed. This, however, tied into the framing of the account; important to the protagonist unraveling the mystery, but a little frustrating when jump-cutting between Edie’s contemporary present (set in London, England) and the WWII background against which the mystery played out (set in London and a fictional castle along the English countryside). At times, the jump-cuts in time made it a bit difficult to pick up where I’d left off at that part of the story. The breaks, however, resulted in a place to take a well-needed breather, and to digest all that had transpired in that section.

Perhaps one or two story details felt a hair contrived—and possibly the ending to some degree, but the author used each in a way that revealed character and/or motivation, or to bring full circle key elements used throughout the story. Abundant use of detail also had me looking back on many occasions; to be sure I hadn’t missed anything, or that I fully understood how every minute facet related to any particular part of the story at any given point.

Having shared all that, let me tell you what I liked!

The author’s voice worked effortlessly into tangible descriptions of abstract concepts to develop each character, regardless of the point of view (POV).  A simple action: a haircut, knitted and crafted to deliver deep insight to character—brilliant! (p. 257-258). Some examples:

“Other people, Daddy’s pompous friends…, just seemed to take up more air than they should.” (p. 303)

“Her skin felt tighter than usual.” (p. 310)

“She was less of a girl, taller, stretched, anxiously filling her extra inches.” (p. 411)

Ms. Morton’s fresh use of metaphor resulted in vivid mind pictures and associations as I read:

“Juniper was rather catlike, after all: the wide-apart set eyes with their fixed gaze, the lightness of foot, the resistance to attention she hadn’t sought.” (p. 123)

“…the autumn of discarded papers on the floor.” (p. 122)

The author’s way of showing tangled, honest emotion(s):

“Mum and Dad were snobs. I felt embarrassed for them and embarrassed for me, and then, confusingly, angry with Rita for saying it and ashamed of myself for encouraging her to do so.” (p. 192)

And back to Kate Morton’s voice, probably the strongest—yet equally gentle—I’ve read in a long time. I’m thinking her view of the world is unexpectedly embedded in each of the characters she brings to life.

“John Keats said that nothing became real until it is experienced.” (p. 295)

“He would be a different person by then, inexorably altered, …as damaged as the city around him…. He would know that while John Keats was correct, that experience was indeed truth, there were some things it was well not to know firsthand.” (p. 303)

“Happiness in life is not a given. It must be seized.” (p. 352)

 I could go on.

I won’t.

Guess what I’m saying is this: if you want an awesome read and are willing to go the circa 600-page marathon, The Distant Hours may be just your cup of tea. Make sure to grab a scone or two before you cuddle up.

Have a great weekend,

Joanna

Weekend Read: Beyond Tuesday Morning

Earlier this week I posted my thoughts on inspirational author Karen Kingsbury’s One Tuesday Morning. Feel free to read that article here. (But y’all come back now, y’hear?)

All I kept wondering as I neared the end of One Tuesday Morning was What about Jamie Bryan?

The protagonist of the prequel had been put through every emotion a woman deeply in love with her husband and faced with the possibility of losing him could experience. The author slammed her hard as I suppose any heroine could be slammed—and then gave her an emotionally-charged follow-up love story in which to star.

From the author’s webpage on this book:

It’s been three years since the terrorist attacks on New York City, but FDNY widow Jamie Bryan keeps waking up to the aching pain of that one Tuesday morning, the morning of September 11, 2001.

Determined to find meaning in her grief, Jamie pours her life into volunteer work at St. Paul’s, the small memorial chapel across from where the twin towers once stood. In the stream of broken, grieving people who make their way through the church doors, Jamie connects with two men—a firefighter forever changed by the attacks, and a Los Angeles police officer.

Unsure and feeling somehow guilty, Jamie opens herself to the possibility of loving again. But what she learns about one man sends her reeling. How can this be God’s plan for her life?

Now only the persistence of a tenacious man, questions from Jamie’s curious young daughter, and words from her dead husband’s journal can move Jamie Bryan beyond one Tuesday morning—toward life.

I enjoyed this book. Perhaps not quite as much as its prequel but the subject matter and story lines were poignant in a different way; relatable to many, especially those who deal in loss daily and even more so for those who suffered it because of the events of 9/11. Maybe the conflict wasn’t quite as strong as its predecessor’s; at times the conflict even felt a bit contrived. One particular point of view was not necessarily to my taste, but it was used sparingly. Despite those issues, the author did her job: keeping me engrossed, captivated and turning the pages by creating conflicts that kept story questions turning in my head. And there was simply no way to NOT like the story’s key players.

Not only did Jamie Bryan have to deal with her inner demons (primarily guilt), she needed to resolve external conflicts stemming from One Tuesday Morning that landed her in the situation she started out in. Clay, the man for whom she falls, is just the steadfast kind of guy I happen to love reading (and writing) about. And I also like stories in which characters take on a tangible presence despite not being physical entities.

All in all, the story conflict and developments were handled quite nicely by the author via dialogue and themes of trust woven throughout the narrative—themes that I found working their way into my day while I read and now that I’m done. A good reminder for me that no matter how dire a situation gets, hope keeps one going; and love—from more sources than we realize—gives fortitude to reach beyond the comfort zones to live life fully.

Have a great weekend, folks!

Joanna

Weekend Read: Our Little Secrets

Happy Friday and upcoming weekend, all. Wow. Can’t believe the Olympics are winding down already. So psyched about Andy Murray’s gold and first big win!

Just finished reading Our Little Secrets by Merry Farmer, indie author, fellow Twitter-pal (and PA ‘neighbor’ :) ).

This captivating historical, set circa the early 1900s, caught my attention immediately.

Premise: Girl seeking to escape her past steps off a train in a frontier town. She meets the general store’s owner, an apparently kind and clever chap with whom she immediately feels chemistry. He’s looking to change the town’s perception of him, shall we say? So, within 24 hours, Miss Charlotte Baldwin and Mr. Michael West agree to a business arrangement and marry. They make a pact not to ask questions about each other’s pasts. 

I absolutely loved the characters and liked the story circumstances that brought this pair together—especially a MAJOR twist—and helped them grow and change as individuals and as a couple. The author did a wonderful job creating chemistry between “Charlie” and Michael, as well as fun, witty interchanges between the two that were delightful to read. I also tend to enjoy stories where the hero/heroine are on each other’s side from the start. This story did not disappoint.

Being a reader who tends to go for the gorgeous alpha-looking hero with the beta-guy’s heart, I liked that I was endeared to Michael even though he wasn’t described as the eye-candy type. Who he was off the bat—and the inner hero brought about via the story events—made me often forget he wasn’t necessarily packaged in that traditional leading man model we romance lovers tend to expect. (BUT: Part of Ms. Farmer’s dedication was to her first celebrity crush named—hmm, Michael. Despite a clue she provided I’m still wondering who he is, lol.)

Set against the incredible Montana landscape (one I hope to visit one day), Ms. Farmer did a very nice job painting the setting and period details. I definitely felt transported to the turn of the century and felt grounded there the entire time. She kept me turning the pages and now has me looking forward to the sequel (to which she provides a sneak-peak at the end of the book).

A great weekend read! Get Our Little Secrets (and/or Merry’s other titles) here: Nook or Kindle

Visit Ms. Merry at her website.  Like her on Facebook and/or follow her on Twitter and let her know your thoughts on her works! (We authors LOVE that!)

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Have a great weekend! Thanks for your time,

Joanna

On A Virtual Visit with Babette James…

Happy first Friday in August folks–hey! Didn’t July start just the other day? Where did it go?

I’m visiting with fellow Liberty States Fiction Writers member Babette James today! She’s been kind enough to offer me the opportunity to share the topic of my recent talk at the Howell Twp Public Library in NJ. So if you couldn’t be there in person, here are the highlights of my chat with some very nice folks who took time out of their busy Saturday to hear what I had to say.

You’ll find a little sneak-peak there as well. Come on over: http://babettejames.com/2012/08/03/what-id-do-differently-by-joanna-aislinn/

Joanna

Best Compilation for a Writer Yet–and More!

Happy Thursday, friends; summer is upon us and so are the Wimbledon’s Tennis Championships! (I’ve got A LOT of papers to file–an entire school year’s worth, lol.) Nothing like plopping the laptop onto my desk and following the matches and my fave players while I grind through the tedious job of sorting through notes, reports, etc. I’m planning to go paperless on the reports next year.

I’ve been having issues with getting those next few wips off the ground, so today, I decided to share some pretty awesome resources that have been helping me in the brainstorming and story structure departments. Hope some/all of these will be of some help to you too! :)

This compilation by Margo Berendsen was so awesome, it needed a ‘pointing to’ all its own. Packed with tips and reference articles on writing and especially revision, I may be combing through this over the course of the next few weeks!  Thanks Margo!

21 Ways to Make Your Plot More Compelling

  Plotting Simplified–Eddie Jones–the BEST $0.99 you’ll ever spend. (Read my thoughts on this packed little gem here.)

  Break Into Fiction: 11 Steps to Building a Story That Sells–Dianna Love and Mary Buckham. This one seems particularly geared to those who like compiling lists and character sketches at every imaginable level. You’ll gain excellent insight into characters and conflict, with examples from three very popular movies included for every checklist!

  Yesterday, I picked up Roz Morris’ Nail Your Novel; currently working my way through her thoughts and exercises for reviving and revising that first draft or even seeing one through. I’m liking her style and approach: formal exercises via a bit of an informal approach–feel more my style at this point.

I’d love to know if you’re familiar with these resources. If so, how have you utilized them in any way? Did you find them helpful? If so, how?

As always, I thank you for stopping in, and taking the time to SHARE, assuming you care to do so!

Have a wonderful day,

Joanna

Weekend Read: Mary Reed McCall’s The Crimson Lady

Hi all,

Just a little behind this weekend, but I wanted to get my second weekly post in. Hope all is well with everyone on this day!

Disclaimer: The following is my opinion of Mary Reed McCall’s THE CRIMSON LADY. This book was purchased by me at Who Dares Wins Publishing and I’m sharing my thoughts simply because I want to!

Guess the lovely cover art caught my attention but this wonderful tale kept me turning the pages. I happen to love stories where the hero and heroine find peace with each other early on and spend the rest of the story battling the story events (and a few of their inner demons) to find the way to their happily-ever-after. (I can give that part away. The story is a romance.)

Braeden de Cantor (such a cool name, too) is exactly the type of hero every woman wishes would walk into her life. Although we meet him a fugitive, he is steeped in honor and integrity. Reluctantly, he upends Fiona Byrne’s world by making her accompany him, certain she is the key to finding his missing foster sister. He also needs to confront his uncle, who imprisoned and tortured Braeden, most likely kidnapped his sister and marred his good name in a world where honor is everything.

Fiona is three years escaped from the world of prostitution, into which she was sold at age fifteen.  That time she spent burying her alter-egos, Giselle and The Crimson Lady. She has also re-established herself as a respectable widow in a world where prostitutes are looked down upon and are not to be associated with by people of genteel society. Braeden’s quest is a major threat to her fragile peace, especially when he leaves her no choice but to lead him to the group of outlaws with whom she partnered in the past, as they are the only ones who can connect Braeden with the man who is responsible for his sister’s disappearance. This same man, who purchased and imprisoned Fiona (physically, mentally and emotionally) is also the only one who can restore Braeden’s good name.

Neither of these well-developed characters needed long to discover the goodness in each other. Braeden is frequently at odds with the juxtaposed images he has of the hardened Crimson Lady and the warm, compassionate woman he is drawn to immediately and ever more as he knows her through her words and kind actions, especially among the outlaws. Fiona needs time to realize she can be loved despite the hell she lived at the hands of multiple men. (Braeden, of course, is just the loving kind of warrior to do it. And he’s pretty hot, too! ;) )

This story was well-written and peppered with enough period detail to get me looking up words and learning more about medieval times, the clothing of the time and vocabulary specific to that era. I look forward to more from this author.

Have a great day and weekend everyone. Please remember to take a moment and click a SHARE button if you’re so inclined. See y’all next week!

Joanna

Modern American Tragedy: House of Sand and Fog

Good day, everyone!

Anybody out there remember Woody Woodpecker? No, I wasn’t a fan, but my brothers watched it on occasion. I only remember one episode. Woody found a (planted) buried treasure map and took off on a destined-to-fail journey to find it. (No! You don’t say!) He spent all his time (and money) trying to resolve the conflict but only got in deeper every minute.

Meanwhile, a Captain Haddock kept following the action. All he said over and over was,

“If Woody had gone right to the police, this would never have happened.”

That’s the line that kept jumping into my head the deeper I got into Andre Dubus III’s House of Sand and Fog.

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Disclaimer: I happened upon this book at my school’s teacher’s lunchroom. In no way was this review solicited nor was I paid to share my thoughts on it. I do so because I felt deeply impacted by this story. 

This conflict-driven thriller grabbed me early on through its first person points of view of the lead characters. Colonel Behrani is an immigrant who has one goal: re-establish the lifestyle his family was accustomed to before their flight from Iran when the Shah’s regime was overtaken. We meet him as a ‘garbage soldier’ (i.e., part of the California highway clean-up committee) and convenience store worker, holding both jobs simultaneously to maintain the façade his wife insists upon, at least until their daughter has married someone from an Iranian family with a lifestyle. The colonel also knows his fourteen year-old son is eventually to attend university and will need funds to see him through. (Neither child knows the colonel’s circumstances. He hides them well.)

The colonel though, is seriously burnt. The American dream appears to have eluded his family and he decides real estate is his escape from the drudgery he lives daily. When he comes upon across a newspaper ad announcing a tiny bungalow being auctioned by the county, he jumps on it. He spends $45K of the $48K left of his savings and purchases the home.

Kathy Nicolo, a recovering addict who makes a job-to-job living cleaning homes, is ousted from the one she inherited from her father. Eight months prior, her husband left her, giving her no reason why. Driven by her need to prove to her family (who lives on the east coast) she is not the failure she believes they think she is, Kathy keeps her falling-apart-life to herself.

Lester Burdon is the married deputy sheriff who is present when Kathy is forced to leave her home. Drawn to her for reasons he can’t explain, he begins offering his help and soon finds himself in love. (Not sure how much his judgment was impaired before he met up with her.)

In a nutshell, this story is a collection of characters’ choices that culminate in calamity. I wanted to choke every single one. Each one’s backstory, however, lent me no option but to have compassion and some understanding of what drove their actions. This is a rough story to watch play out, but one you’ll never forget either. Oh, and Mr. DuBos leaves no loose story ends; he ties up every one.

For those who’d rather watch the movie version (which I have not): here’s a link to the trailer. Chances are, you can find it On Demand via your cable service or on Netflix. (Loved the casting of Ben Kingly as the colonel. Nothing against Jennifer Connelly and Ron Eldard, but I’m not sure I agree with them as Kathy and Lester—thought they were a bit young. Ron Eldard, though has a great look for personifying Lester’s underlying insecurity.)

Finally, for the Woody Woodpecker fans, watch Bunco Busters. I loved it today as much as I did then. Hate to say it, but in its own strange way the episode is a great illustration of House’s conflict (minus the installment’s happy ending).

Here’s to a wonderful day to all! If you enjoyed the content, please take a second to click a SHARE button below! Thank you!

Joanna

 

Happily Divorced Fans: Gather Here!

Happy Wednesday before Easter  and Passover, friends. Hope all of you who celebrate aren’t stressin’. (If you are, you might want to read the preceding post. :D )

Y’all know my fascination with Fran Drescher and especially her alter-ego Fran Fine. That means y’all know I jumped on the Happily Divorced bandwagon as soon as I got wind of it. I read some complaints; the show was set in LA vs. NYC, etc, etc and so forth. No matter what, I had to give it a fair try.

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The show is based on Ms. Drescher’s real-life situation with her ex-husband and still reported best friend, Peter Marc Jacobson. They produce Happily Divorced together and, I believe, collaborate on some of the writing. Here’s the premise: eighteen years into marriage a woman is awakened by her husband who tells her he’s gay. On the show, said husband can’t afford to move out of the house, so he moves into the den until different living arrangements become possible. Within six months, said couple divorces but now ex-husband (‘Peter’) continues to live with his former wife (‘Fran’). (You can watch a clip here.)

So beside original use of names, this show started out okay and improved during its short debut season. John Michael Higgins’ portrayal of Peter is positively endearing: he’s naïve, funny and charming or, as we say in Italian, simpatico. (The literal translation is sympathetic, but that’s not quite accurate. Relatable is a little better but I tend to like ‘endearing’ the most. Oh, and he’s got adorable dimples too.) Love Tichina Arnold’s regular singing spots—the woman can belt out those tunes—and Valente Rodriguez (who really does look like my dad in his younger days) is as sweetly entertaining as Cesar as he was playing Ernie in George Lopez.

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What I love best about the show is the deep friendship Peter and Fran share. Not only is it a lovely tribute to the one the characters’ real-life counterparts described on Oprah; I find it special because it reminds me of the relationship my own hubby and I have. Heck. If my guy and I weren’t friends and committed to our marriage (or ready to be committed, depending on the day), I might have found myself unhappily divorced and possibly writing this from a whole different perspective.

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Ironically enough, the one beef I have about this show no one would expect me to have. As much as I could easily be a Nanny groupie, I wish they’d stop all the references to that show. Seems like the writers and producers aren’t sure they’ve got a hit on their hands without bringing back Nanny cast members (i.e., Renee Taylor and Charles Shaunessey) and capitalizing on a slew of Nanny lines. From what I understand, the same designer dresses Fran (and does a phenomenal job working with Ms. Drescher’s pear shape—amen and blessings to that lovely lady. Wish I had ten minutes with her and a few of those gorgeous get-ups from either show.)

Other than that, I’m already tuned in and loving Season Two.

What say you? Any fans out there? Those who’d rather the show, Fran and the rest of the crew go away? Air your thoughts here! And assuming you enjoyed the content, if you please, won’t you click on a share button below? As always, I thank you!

Happy rest of the week, Happy Passover and Happy Easter to all who celebrate it,

Joanna

Plot Problems? Simplify!

Happy Friday, everyone. Spring is here and this girl is very happy. Not that my little part of the east coast had much of a winter, but I’m thrilled to see trees budding/flowering and crocuses and daffodils in full bloom. Yep, they’re early this year–what’s can I do but fully enjoy nature’s beauty while it makes my heart sing?

Came across a couple of great books recently: I’ll be sharing them over the course of the next few Fridays or Saturdays (just to keep y’all guessin’ ;) )

For those (like myself) who have a hard time with getting all those story flashes to fall into place, a tiny little read—and best $0.99 spent on a book so far:

Eddie Jones Plotting Simplified: Story Structure Tips For The Break-Out Novelist (Writing With Excellence) (Kindle Edition)

Picked up this little jewel a week ago–yes, price was a swaying factor, as was the title: Plotting Simplified. This tiny write-up was exactly what this writer needed: a short, condensed version of how to put together a plot. Mr. Jones used excellent phrases that really spoke to me, giving me perspective and insight I didn’t have before. (i.e., He touted the inciting incidence as the ‘great disturbance’–never occurred to me the worst thing that could happen to story’s lead character could also be the best.)

I loved, too, that this book was SHORT. Took me about 90 concentrated minutes to read/take detailed notes from beginning to end. Now I feel prepared to fill in some blanks and work out plotting issues I’ve had with one particular story I need to finish a trilogy.

I held back on that fifth star for only one reason: I would have liked a little more detail for putting together Act III.

No Kindle, you say? No problem! Download the app to your computer just as I did! (All are free!) You can also download the the pertinent app to your I-Phone, I-Pad, android device–you know “there’s an app for that” too.  You’ll also have the option of reading your book in Kindle’s cloud–very cool. (Thumbs up.)

Looking forward to other how-to books by this author. Learn more about him at his website!

Here’s to a great weekend to all!

Joanna

Jenn Nixon can be WILD AND WICKED!

Getting a seriously late-in-the-day start friends, but happy Friday and upcoming weekend just the same. I am SO looking forward to the BNP Paribas Tennis Championships starting tomorrow. I need something to tide me over until the French Open late in May!

Just finished reading fellow Liberty States Fiction Writer Jenn Nixon’s WILD AND WICKED:  Quick, short read, a very fun ride and so NOT LACKING in heat and perfect for getting you through the weekend. (Please note: I received a free copy of this book in exchange for my thoughts on it.)

In a nutshell, Veronica Chance, goes undercover as a waitress at a “gentlemen’s club.” She is in search of her sister, who appears to have gone missing. On her first night at work, she winds up providing a mini lap dance to none other than the country’s most sought after detective, Mason Storm. Each immediately realizes the chemistry between them. Mason quickly picks up on Veronica being in such a place for more than cash. Veronica senses the ‘good guy’ in Mason. As the night winds down Mason has his first opportunity to play hero and rescues Veronica when he realizes she was drugged at an after-party where hedonism runs rampant, women are used and possibly being trafficked. Mason is also impressed with Veronica’s smarts; most especially how much she’s learned—in one night— about a case he’s been working on for two years. They agree to team up.

The rest you’ll have to read for yourself.

I have to say, author Jenn Nixon packed a whole lot of story into 48 short pages. She had me hooked on Mason by the end of his first scene. (I’m such a sucker for the hero who picks up on the damsel in distress.) Veronica is self-assured, smart, witty and just…happening. Well written, fast-paced; packed with chemistry, humor, vivid language and popping scenes on all levels, WILD AND WICKED did not disappoint. (I take that back. It did too disappoint. It ended. But: CHANCE OF A STORM, the sequel, is available. I’ll be reading–and most likely providing my take on it too!) Read more about all of Jenn’s books at her website!

About the author: Jenn Nixon was born, raised, and still resides in New Jersey . She is a member of Romance Writers of America and Liberty States Fiction Writers. An active blogger and social media participant, Jenn likes to stay on top of what’s hot and popular around the world whether it’s TV, books, movies, or politics.

Like what you read? Please take a second to click a share button or two. You’ll not only be doing me a service, you’ll be promoting Jenn’s work as well! We both thank you!

Have a great weekend and enjoy all your weekend reads!

Joanna